Hot air balloon race

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is the sentences.

I need to improve on spelling.

I was super excited to go on a cool ride on a hot air balloon to win the reward.
I really want the 1,000,000 million dollars.

I went with my best friends, Max and Kane.
We were 3rd place and we just passed the red hot air balloon.

When I went with Max and Kane on the hot air balloon and we were still in second place.
We have to pass 4 more places and we look at the ground and we were so high. Kane, Max
and I were so scared and we saw our mums and dads saying “You can do it!”
and we were not scared anymore. We were brave and we had a little snack, it was pizza.
We had 2 boxes and we had two apples and we finished. We almost caught up and we just
got by him. We were almost to the finish line up in the air and we saw it by New Zealand.
We were almost there and we just lost the tournament and it was all right.

Animal town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing.
We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is that it is creative.

I need to improve on my spelling.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

Roar!! What was that noise? I walk to animal town and I am excited to go there.
It looks so cool and awesome and I was super excited to go to animal town.
We bought some food. When we got to animal town, it had so many animals.
The lion roared and it was 50 m away and he roared again and  we were so close and
we just saw the sign.

We saw the lion and he wanted meat because it was hungry and starving. He roared three
times and i got so excited.
We saw an orangutan. It was fluffy and orange and it was beating its chest.

Mr Golf

Mr golf taught us how to practice golf and how to do some hits with the launcher and the ball can go so far. We learned you have to put your feet in the middle and in the circle and point it to your belly and make a Y and make it in a L when you want to hit it.

The Pou

As part of our writing programme we have been doing environmental writing. We had to sketch an object and as we were sketching we wrote down thoughts that we had. Then we wrote our thoughts down  as a poem. We cut out the sketch and added this to our writing.

ASB

On Wednesday we had Marlon from ASB Get wise talking to us about saving our money, spending money on needs not wants and using invisible money ie eftpos. I have made a google draw to show what I have learnt. I liked learning about

My mum is the best mum in the world

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ANZAC Day

we work on what is ANZAC day and we had to watch a video to se what the anser was to all the qwicchins we had to do in our google drawring.