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Monday, 20 April 2020

Show not tell

Show not tell
20/04/2020

It was a nice sunny hot day, I can feel my ice cream melting on my hand, I hopped in the car on a soft seat,we drove past some house’s and some big tall trees. We arived to the beach, i stepped out of the car onto the hot sand, the sand got stuk betwin my toes it was hot, I ran to the water, the water was so cold my feet were frezzing.