Animal town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing.
We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is that it is creative.

I need to improve on my spelling.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

Roar!! What was that noise? I walk to animal town and I am excited to go there.
It looks so cool and awesome and I was super excited to go to animal town.
We bought some food. When we got to animal town, it had so many animals.
The lion roared and it was 50 m away and he roared again and  we were so close and
we just saw the sign.

We saw the lion and he wanted meat because it was hungry and starving. He roared three
times and i got so excited.
We saw an orangutan. It was fluffy and orange and it was beating its chest.