This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is the sentences.
I need to improve on spelling.
I was super excited to go on a cool ride on a hot air balloon to win the reward.
I really want the 1,000,000 million dollars.
I really want the 1,000,000 million dollars.
I went with my best friends, Max and Kane.
We were 3rd place and we just passed the red hot air balloon.
We were 3rd place and we just passed the red hot air balloon.
When I went with Max and Kane on the hot air balloon and we were still in second place.
We have to pass 4 more places and we look at the ground and we were so high. Kane, Max
and I were so scared and we saw our mums and dads saying “You can do it!”
and we were not scared anymore. We were brave and we had a little snack, it was pizza.
We had 2 boxes and we had two apples and we finished. We almost caught up and we just
got by him. We were almost to the finish line up in the air and we saw it by New Zealand.
We were almost there and we just lost the tournament and it was all right.
We have to pass 4 more places and we look at the ground and we were so high. Kane, Max
and I were so scared and we saw our mums and dads saying “You can do it!”
and we were not scared anymore. We were brave and we had a little snack, it was pizza.
We had 2 boxes and we had two apples and we finished. We almost caught up and we just
got by him. We were almost to the finish line up in the air and we saw it by New Zealand.
We were almost there and we just lost the tournament and it was all right.
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